Evelyn Brooks Higginbotham's “African American Women's History and the Metalanguage of Race” and Elsa Barkley Brown's, “'What Has Happened Here': The Politics of Difference in Women's History and Feminist Politics” both address the necessity of considering race in feminist studies and in women-specific issues, though in very different methods. Higginbotham takes a thematic approach that breaks down different components of womens' lives such as sexuality, gender, and class through the lens of race, while Brown uses the case study of Anita Hill to illustrate the problems that arise when racial issues are displaced by, rather than integrated with gender issues. Atha Fong's paper, “Ma Rainey: Voicing, Shaping, and Challenging Identities by Wielding the Power of Performance,” combines these two approaches in order to discuss the impact of Ma Rainey on shaping cultural perceptions.
One of the biggest strengths of the Higginbotham essay is it's clarity. Higginbotham is very explicit about her motive: to “expose the role of race as a metalanguage by calling attention to its powerful, all-encompassing effect on the construction and representation of other social and power relations, namely, gender, class, and sexuality.” (Signs 252) The paper progress very methodically, first defining race, then explaining its critical relationship to gender, and finally picking apart the aforementioned social relationships of women through the lens of race. Her argument's strength rests on the cumulative build up of multiple different arenas in which race effects social relationships, leading the reader quite easily to the final conclusion that race is an intrinsic part of gender conception.
Critical to Higginbotham's argument is her critique on 'traditional' women's studies; she asserts white feminists fail to “separate their whiteness from their womanness.” and view black women's gender and racial identities as separate entities. More problematic, according to Higginbotham, is the way in which white feminists conclude that non-white women's gender identity is of the same, white variety that they have come to identify within themselves. But by outlining and differentiating society's interactions with white and black women in reference to specific women's issues such as gender and sexuality, she demonstrates the necessity to look at gender issues from a race perspective, and vice versa.
Higginbotham uses historical sources primarily as a way to validate the legitimacy of her contrarian argument, sticking to well known and respected historians such as W. E. B. Dubois and Michel Foucault. This is a necessary strategy when challenging any kind of intellectual status quo – putting one's self in line with the intellectual trajectory of recognized greats legitimizes the argument to potential skeptics.
Brown essentially argues the same thing as Higginbotham, arguing that “we have still to recognize that being a woman is, in fact, not extractable from the context in which one is a woman – that is, race class, time, and place.” (Brown 300) Brown's focus, however, is larger, moving beyond differences in race between women and considering every kind of possible dividing force between women. For Brown, the stakes are high – she writes that the problem of difference “challenges women's history at its core, for it suggests that until women's historians adequately address difference and the causes for it, they have not and can not adequately tell the history of even white middle-class women.” (Brown 301)
She spends a great deal of her paper setting up illustrations to explain how differences between women can help unite themselves, so much that I feel it uncomfortably distances itself from the meat and potatoes of the essay: the case study of Anita Hill. Anita Hill is the crux of her argument, the shining example that both proves her argument and makes it relevant and worthy of consideration. But the Anita Hill analysis gets lost in a sea of set up, analogy, and explanation. I feel like the Brown paper lacks the structural simplicity and elegance of the Higginbotham paper, and for that reason more than any other fails to articulate its argument as clearly. Though it doesn't draw on historical narrative the way that Higginbotham's paper does, I feel like for this style of argument, it isn't as important of an issue. However, in spite of these failings, the Brown essay makes the problem appear relevant in a way that Higginbotham's does not by explaining how this fundamentally intellectual issue can create severe problems in the administration of justice and the interpretation of law.
To me, Atha Fong's paper does a lot right, but it is by no means a perfect paper. Her analysis of Ma Rainey and the impact she had on shaping cultural perceptions of African American women combines the Higginbotham and Brown approaches by synthesizing the clarity of a careful thematic organization with the depth and personality of a case study. Her thesis is quite simple and clearly marked: “Through the widespread reach of her music, Ma Rainey forced black audiences to renegotiate their African American identities in terms of black women's experiences; at the same time, she exposed white audiences to the struggles and trials of black women.” ( Herodotus 18) However, her introduction falls off the tracks after the thesis and reads rather like an annotated bibliography, which is unnecessary, particularly for a personal case study.
I was also confused by her constant reference to a “culture of dissemblance.” The paper hints that Rainey's rebellion against the “culture of dissemblance” was a key part of what defined her contrarian nature, so it would have been nice to know what the “culture of dissemblance” was. Furthermore, I felt like some sections were unnecessary and did not contribute overall to the argument Fong was making. In particular, her section on “Unforgettable Performances and a Position of Influence,” while interesting, says almost nothing that isn't covered in other sections, and while Fong's gift for narrative is undeniable, I feel like unnecessary sections like this harm the argumentative power of the paper. But for me, the biggest intellectual deficiency in the Fong paper is her cursory glance at the huge problem of Ma Rainey perpetuating negative stereotypes about African American women. I feel like this issue is extraordinarily relevant to Fong's argument that Ma Rainey helped break down preconceptions about African American women and was revolutionary in sharing their struggle. This issue clearly deserves much more than a small mention near the closing of the page.
But ultimately, the paper accomplishes what it set out to do. Like with Higginbotham's paper, the organization ultimately carries Fong's paper. The only thing that seriously prevents this paper from being excellent is the excessive emphasis on less than relevant topics and the lack of emphasis on the negative effects Ma Rainey's music had.